Thursday, 11 February 2016

Freedom and Liberty: Final Piece and Evaluation



I think to improve this piece I could:

  • Include a wider variety of cleaning and organisational skills
  • Cut the editing so that towards 'the cut' that the editing becomes more fast paced and quicker cuts to build tension - showing a build up of the character's life and the pressure of cleaning 
  • Colouring - make it darker 
  • actually build a string to control the puppet OR animate in string 
  • foley sound 
  • include a voiceover or the poem that originally inspired the short film
  • More theatrics? vignette?
I explained that my idea for the framing was based around that I wanted there to be a 4th wall, similar to how puppet shows are constructed, to take this further I could create an actual puppet show and build a set. 

What worked well:
  • Music - mechanical/ robotic like - presents character as robotic housewife almost
  • Concept - was a clear idea
  • performance
  • 4th wall - set up of cinematography and mise en scene

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