We went through this and picked out the following mistakes that we needed to fix:
- cut from black in the beginning
- cut from Lila - jumper, so Lila reacts
- camera needs to be closer in the photo of the family - mirror frames?? vignette?
- Reshoot the papers
- camouflage
- shot needs to be longer and more in focus of the paper in the bin
- close up of acceptance letter part
- less time packing
- too short, can't read paper work
- Dawn needs to see Lila leaving and then react
- lighting is too harsh in close ups - colour grade??
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