Tuesday 23 February 2016

Caught in the Act: 2nd Draft


We went through this and picked out the following mistakes that we needed to fix:

  • cut from black in the beginning
  • cut from Lila - jumper, so Lila reacts 
  • camera needs to be closer in the photo of the family - mirror frames?? vignette?
  • Reshoot the papers
  • camouflage
  • shot needs to be longer and more in focus of the paper in the bin
  • close up of acceptance letter part
  • less time packing
  • too short, can't read paper work
  • Dawn needs to see Lila leaving and then react
  • lighting is too harsh in close ups - colour grade??  

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