We wanted to colour grade but unfortunately, didn't get round to do it. Unlike other group projects, I thoroughly enjoyed working in this group, all ideas were listened to and everyone pulled their weight in the group. Really pleased with the outcome of this piece, despite the problems with cinematography, I think that this piece can easily be reshot and will work better - I loved the process of script writing and hope to continue it into my FMP.
To improve our piece:
- different lenses 50/35mm
- lighting
- vignette photo of family??
- Dawn needs to be more physical - only concentrating on her laptop
- no need to close laptop, didn't help character development
- hug needs to be harder
- some shots not in focus
- make it clearer for paperwork
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