Feedback from Sound Design work

Feedback for Sound Journey:

Add more sound spots

Like the gradual build

End should be louder – more chaotic finish

Not obvious what is being listened to

Good progression so sound moves smoothly

 I agree with these comments, I think that I could've improved the foley making it more obvious what was being listened to. I think I could also improve by building the end up to be more chaotic

Feedback for Film Clip:

Beginning of piece is similar to sound journey

Add lightning effects

Low piano music to add dark effect

Comical take on dramatic scene – subverting the genre and works

Add more sounds to actions – example Jason getting out of coffin

Like that own recordings have been used

Add more heavy breathing and steps

Syncing could be more accurate

Wind sound – feeling of dread

Felt a bit empty

Very well mixed & synced

Knife sounds fit well and increase intensity

Sound spots are almost perfect

Could do with some reverb

More foreground sounds needed

To improve my film clip piece I could change up the beginning of the clip not repeating the same sounds, add lightning effects synced up to the lighting of the screen. I also need to add more action movement sounds and more dialogue to the scene. I could also add a soundtrack to create more of an atmosphere in this piece, and add reverb to some of the audio clips within my sequence.