Elliot
We didn't finish the project - which I felt really let down by my group. Some group members done more than others, and some none at all - I learnt from this project to not work with your friends. I think that messed our group up was time management - we spent a lot of our time organising the style of our piece - therefore our narrative suffered. To improve I would make sure that this piece is finished to the quality of the first 25 seconds.
Feedback:
- I love the style and mood
- Art style is smooth
- looks fantastic
- fit
- professional - sleek
- looks complete
- narrative suffered - rebalancing thing
- effective visual language
- collaged - enough texture to tell story
- don't make piece longer than 3 minutes
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